“I loved Adam’s development. He started as a sarcastic, foul-mouthed man in the throes of stagnation that found a purpose for himself in his visions, but was still powerless to control the world around him. Then he realizes that his everyday choices alter the most complex facets of his life and what does he say? F**K it! I laughed out loud several times while reading this.”
-Reader, Helium Feedback
“This story so seamlessly balances so many elements of different genres interwoven into a highly entertaining plot. The depth goes beyond what the words or images can begin to say, and afterwards I found myself reading it again ”
-Frank P., Reader Helium, Feedback
“I hope to see it on screen one day, as it is a pretty intelligent, sarcastic, and quick witted film. The meaning of your script wasn’t quick to reveal itself, but I sat down and thought about it for a long time afterwards. Very intriguing.”
-Marion Pflamm, Reader, Helium Feedback
“HOW DID I LIKE IT?
Bottom-line: VERY MUCH. I would love to see what you finally end up with. A truly original script is a rare thing, and you are crafting such a rare thing.”
- Ken, Reader, Helium Feedback
“I would love to see it on the big screen. I can’t think of much I’d change. It’s a great story that kept me reading to FADE OUT.”
- Lee Ann, Reader, Helium Feedback
Helium Feedback was a place for writers to share their works, receive critiques, and give critiques to others. Before they shut down, Stuck Universe was within the top 100 rated screenplays on their listing.
